What do you think of the first chapter of my novel (short, easy 10 points)?

more showing, less telling. Don't explain to me the mother's relation to her, let us find out. Give us clues, it adds more intruige. But other than that i do enjoy it...i very much like your dialouge you are very good at dialogue (something that i suck at) but just retouch your adjectives, make them more interesting. other than that though, i'd say you have a lovely first draft :)